We’ve now published 125 systematic criteria-driven reviews of PR news releases about health care or research. We won’t apply all of our criteria to this one, because it is the often-all-important headline that is the focus of our commentary.
On Twitter, UC Davis professor Jonathan Eisen (@phylogenomics), wrote:
Immunology scientist David Usharauli (@3DiMMUNE) tweeted:
To be clear: this isn’t a comment on the importance or quality of the research. All of the above commentary, with which I agree, is about how the words matter. It’s about how science communication matters. It’s about how PR news releases from major institutions matter. And this news release got off to a very bad start.
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Puleeeeease... this 'game changer' weight loss drug causes more nausea and vomiting than a placebo. Some game, some change. My friend Gary would spank you for using the eighth word medical reporters should never, ever use. @garyschwitzer @thackerpd
https://www.healthnewsreview.org/toolkit/just-journalists-writing-tips-case-studies/7-words-and-more-you-shouldnt-use-in-medical-news/ https://twitter.com/OttawaCitizen/status/1361426796126830597
A scary @statnews Op-Ed warns that govt attempts to rein in Pharma may cut off access to "life-changing" drugs.
It takes @garyschwitzer to let us know: the author spent 10 years as Pfizer's public-policy chief. https://twitter.com/garyschwitzer/status/1360325022578053123
.@TranspariMED criticizes STAT op-ed for not disclosing pharma funding of author’s institute - similar to criticism we’ve made of STAT op-eds in the past. @transparify @ThinkTankWatch @icer_review https://www.healthnewsreview.org/2021/02/transparency-watchdog-criticizes-stats-non-disclosure-on-pro-pharma-op-ed/
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Diana Yates
February 22, 2016 at 8:39 amWould “Neuroscientists reverse autism-like symptoms in mice” be better? The criticism is fair – and important – but, also to be fair, the headline does not appear to “turn mice into humans.” It’s clear from the whole headline (including the sub-head) that the research was done in mice.
Kevin Lomangino
February 22, 2016 at 10:12 amDiana,
Thanks for your comment. Yes, I think Gary’s point is that your proposed headline would have been much much better. The big bold headline is what most people see and oftentimes what gets picked up by other outlets reposting the content (without the subhead). Context needs to be provided as high up as possible — not after the research has been hyped in the big bold headline.
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