New pill might be reliable wake-up call
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New pill might be reliable wake-up call
Our Review Summary
This is not a good piece of health journalism. It is not balanced. It fails to discuss any evidence. The report demonstrates little curiosity and no rigor.
With the exception of the brief (and rather understated) quote from a sleep specialist, the story reads like it should say "advertising" at the top of the page.
The Daily News editors should be embarrassed for allowing this story into print.
Criteria
Not Satisfactory
The story states a price of $29.95 for 40 pills, but fails to indicate what the recommended dosage is. The author took two in the evening but the other user quoted took additional pills during the day. What are the true costs per person per week of this "magical new pill"?
Not Satisfactory
The reporter makes no attempt to quantify the benefits. What is the evidence? How many are helped? How many are not helped?
Not Satisfactory
The article fails to mention any potential harms.
Not Satisfactory
The evidence of benefit consists of the author’s experience, one other user’s experience, and the maker’s claims. Have there been clinical trials? What have they shown? What is the quality of the evidence?
Not Satisfactory
The story exaggerates the author’s waking difficulties in a way that makes this "condition" seem more widespread and harmful than it is.
Not Satisfactory
Sources used are the product’s maker, the reporter’s observations and quotes from a satisfied user. One physician is quoted briefly at the end questioning the ingredients’ capacity to improve sleep. There is improper balance in the story with the weight of terms like "magical…ingenious…unique…even more dramatic results" overwhelming the short comment from one physician.
Not Satisfactory
There are many options for treating sleep difficulties or morning fatigue. None is mentioned here.
Not Satisfactory
The story predicts the product will be available at "all major retail outlets" by August. There is no evidence to support this prediction.
Not Satisfactory
The article claims the coating used to delay release of the ingredients inside is unique. Time-release coatings have been used in pills for decades.
Not Applicable
The story echoes both the press release and the maker’s web site in its description of the episode that led the pill’s creator to develop the product, the contents of the pill, and the claims about the pill’s "unique" coating. However, because our criterion demands that we find the exact same language in the story as we found in a news release, we can’t be sure that the story relied solely or largely on a news release. Maybe this an example of where our criteria are too lax.
Total Score: 0 of 9 Satisfactory
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