We applaud the restraint the WebMD headline writer employed with “Drug May Reduce Plaque in Brains of Alzheimer’s Patients.” That’s about all you can say at this point, and the body text of the story explains why. In that regard, this story got off to a better start than its HealthDay competitor.
This story was better in quantifying harms, but the HealthDay competition was better in explaining the history of this area of research and what else is now being investigated.
It would not have required much more effort or space for either news organization to pick up on the better parts of its competitor’s effort. Maybe they will compare and learn from this example. We hope so.
Not applicable. It’s understandable that costs wouldn’t be discussed at this early stage of research.
Adequate explanation of results observed in study participants at different dosing levels.
More importantly, the story simply explained: “Since it’s not completely clear what reductions in brain plaques mean for Alzheimer’s patients, the researchers are unable to say whether treatment with gantenerumab will bring improvement to patients with Alzheimer’s. They are currently involved in a new study that they hope will answer that question.”
Better than its HealthDay competition in that WebMD actually told us how many people experienced harms in the study.
The story allowed a Roche senior VP to say the results “went beyond our expectations” but countered that with “What is not entirely known is if these plaques cause Alzheimer’s…Therefore, it’s not known if reducing the amount of them will slow or stop the disease.”
The story added an important independent perspective and identified the study co-author as being a senior VP of the drug company making the drug.
We preferred how HealthDay explained: “There are approximately one dozen therapies, including vaccines, that are currently in the pipeline….none are ready for prime time.”
The story ends with an appropriate send-off: “We need more studies to know if it is safe or effective.” The early, experimental nature of the research is clear.
The HealthDay competitor did a better job of explaining where this study fits in the history of research into beta-amyloid.
There was clear evidence of independent reporting.
Systematic, Criteria-Driven
Puleeeeease... this 'game changer' weight loss drug causes more nausea and vomiting than a placebo. Some game, some change. My friend Gary would spank you for using the eighth word medical reporters should never, ever use. @garyschwitzer @thackerpd
https://www.healthnewsreview.org/toolkit/just-journalists-writing-tips-case-studies/7-words-and-more-you-shouldnt-use-in-medical-news/ https://twitter.com/OttawaCitizen/status/1361426796126830597
A scary @statnews Op-Ed warns that govt attempts to rein in Pharma may cut off access to "life-changing" drugs.
It takes @garyschwitzer to let us know: the author spent 10 years as Pfizer's public-policy chief. https://twitter.com/garyschwitzer/status/1360325022578053123
.@TranspariMED criticizes STAT op-ed for not disclosing pharma funding of author’s institute - similar to criticism we’ve made of STAT op-eds in the past. @transparify @ThinkTankWatch @icer_review https://www.healthnewsreview.org/2021/02/transparency-watchdog-criticizes-stats-non-disclosure-on-pro-pharma-op-ed/
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